English 100.20: Composition
Spring 2003
Professor K. Butler
Office TE-6, Room X
e-mail: beanbutler@aol.com
Phone: 203-392-XXXX
Office hours: Tues. 12:30 1:30, 3:15 4:15, Thurs. 12:30 1:30, 3:15 4:15 (and by appointment)
Course Description:
The theme of this
serviced-based course is Literacy and Community. You will be working to improve your reading, writing,
and critical thinking skills as you develop a better understanding of the
issues that shape your community, and influence your values, identity, and
goals for the future. You will learn to connect your writing to something
beyond traditional academics to learn critical life skills by helping to
solve problems that exist within your world.
You will be required to spend
at least ten volunteer hours during the semester helping to identify and solve
problems within your community, thus building a closer link between your campus
and community. As you become
involved in your community, you will become an active rather than passive
learner. Through observing and
working in your community, you will encounter new opportunities and
challenges. Service learning
experiences provide unique opportunities to learn about our increasingly varied
and changing world, to understand people and cultures that are unique, and to
develop resourcefulness, a stronger inner self, and a clearer sense of personal
identity. Working with others from
a different culture and/or economic class can help you begin to think
critically about what advantages you possess, learn to value what other
individuals in your community have a right to expect, and how you can
contribute to your community.
The reading and writing
assignments are designed to help you recognize the qualities of good writing
and to expand your repertoire of writing strategies. We will discuss the qualities of good writing, but more
often we will consider them in relation to your own work and the work of your
peers. By the end of the semester
you should feel more accomplished as composers, assessors, and evaluators of
writing.
Course Goals:
1.
To develop reading and
writing skills in exploring ideas and concepts, to connect and analyze your
literacy and education histories to others¹, and to develop your own points of
view involving literacy and your community. To make you a more critical, skilled writer and thinker.
2.
To allow you to accept
the authority and responsibility that come with being a member of a writing
community and a participant of writing workshops.
3.
To recognize and
critically examine attitudes and values expressed by others in oral and written
form.
4.
To discover methods of
writing targeted toward various audiences, purposes, and genres. To help you assess your own writing and
the writing of your peers. To
improve your editing skills in revising first drafts.
5.
To enhance your skills
in understanding and implementing a personalized writing process. To develop your abilities to work
through first drafts, editing, and revision. To understand and accept that error is a necessary and
productive part of the learning process.
To enhance your ability to reflect on your writing process and
rhetorically analyze your own writing and those of others.
6.
To hone your skills in
the conventions of writing that clarify and enhance meaning (including but not
limited to sentence and paragraph structure, usage, and larger organizational
concerns such as thesis and argument development and structure).
7.
To sharpen your skills
in analyzing how an argument makes its point through close analysis of assigned
readings. We will work closely in
identifying and creating clear, well-defended thesis statements.
8.
To explore the
vocabulary and techniques of rhetoric and discourse communities, and to expand
your skills in presenting rhetorical arguments.
Required
Texts/Materials: (Available in SCSU bookstore)
1) Garnes, Humphries, Mortimer, Phegley, and
Wallace. Writing Lives:
Exploring Literacy and Community.
Boston/New York: Bedford, 1996.
2) Reynolds, Nedra.
Portfolio Keeping: A Guide for Students. Boston/New York: Bedford/St. Martin¹s,
2000.
3) One two-pocket folder to be used as a journal/notebook
in which you keep EVERYTHING you do for this course. This includes all drafts of both formal and informal
writing, as well as peer reviews.
You will submit this folder to me at the end of the semester as your
final portfolio. You are responsible for keeping a hard copy and a back-up disk
of all the work you turn in. I am
not responsible for crashed hard drives, bum disks, or computer viruses.
4) An active e-mail account by February 4th.
2.
Four Major Essays:
Literacy
Narrative (3-4 pages)
Public
Literacy Analysis (3-4 pages)
Ethnographic
Methods Essay (3-4 pages)
Reflective
Essay (4-5 pages)
3. Short Essays
Service Learning
Proposal (2-3 pages)
Journals/Notebook Entries (Approximately ¾ page each)
4.
Portfolio: Keep
all of your papers, journal entries, graded work, and revisions in a two-pocket
folder. I will ask you to turn it
in at the end of the semester so I can see how your work has changed over the
course of the semester. I will
grade each paper throughout the semester, but allow you the opportunity to
revise them if you would like to try to attain a higher grade. Your portfolio must be complete
to pass the course.
Your
portfolio should include a transmittal letter of approximately two pages,
written to me, in which you discuss your writing progress throughout the
semester. I want you to reflect
upon your writing, how it has changed through the semester, what papers you
chose to revise, why and how you did so, and what areas of writing and rhetoric
you think you still need to improve upon.
5.
Peer Reviews: You
will be responsible for critiquing first drafts of the members of your peer
writing group. These critiques
provide valuable feedback to help your group members revise their first
drafts. In class, we will review
techniques for performing such critiques.
The quality of your peer reviews will be reflected in your final grade.
6.
Service Learning
Requirement: You are responsible for devoting ten hours volunteering
to work for a community-based project, upon which you will reflect upon and
write about in several of your class assignments. We will discuss various options in class in order to guide
you toward choosing a project that both interests you and gives something back
to your community. I have assigned
specific deadlines for which you must complete two-hour segments of this
service. I will require a letter
from your service project mentor, written on the letterhead of the sponsoring
organization, confirming that you have completed your service commitment. Dates these confirmation letters are
due are noted below in this syllabus.
Your final grade in the
course will be determined as follows:
Journal/Notebook: 30%
Participation, Attendance,
Peer Evaluation: 20%
Final Portfolio: 50%
Policies:
Papers are due on the dates
assigned. If you have a problem
with an assigned due date, please discuss it with me in advance. If you are going to be absent, please
hand your work in early. Papers
turned in late without permission will receive a lowered grade.
Attendance and preparation
are required. I expect you to come
to each class session on time with readings and journal entries prepared for
discussion. Excessive absences will
lower your final grade. You can
miss up to four classes without penalty. For each absence thereafter your course grade will be
affected. After six absences, you will
have to withdraw from the course (or receive an F). The effects of missing class are cumulative. You learn when you are in class. This policy is not meant to be
punitive. I don¹t want to use
it. I want you to be here. If you must be absent for an extended
period of time, please notify me as early as possible.
Please visit me during office
hours if you are having any difficulties or concerns with anything in the
course. I want to see all of you
do as well as possible, and I will spend as much time as I can to help you
succeed.
January 21st: Introductions
to each other; course overview; description of service learning theme; read
aloud short article, ³Service-Learning: Education with a Purpose,² by Jeremy
Taylor.
What is literacy? How do people become literate? What power does one obtain by being
literate in various environments? What
are the risks and benefits of acquiring new literacies? What disadvantages do people who
struggle with various aspects of literacy face?
January 23rd: ³The Practice of Literacy: Entering the
Conversation,² pp. 1 21 (Writing
Lives text)
³Posing Problems:
The Demands of College Writing,² pp. 3 21 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: Describe the process you use to create an academic essay. How have today¹s readings changed the
way you might approach the writing of a future essay? (Update journal after class discussion.)
Discussion
of Literacy Article
Discussion
of Allyn and Bacon article
Free-writing about your understanding of literacy and
rhetoric
January 28th: Amy
Tan, ³Mother Tongue,² pp. 462 468 (handout).
³Writing
an Autobiographical Narrative,¹ pp. 142 164 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: Describe an experience in which
you have altered your normal method of communication in response to a change in
your usual surroundings. What
prompted you to change your method of communication? What was the effect? (Update journal entry after class discussion.)
Discussion of Tan¹s Essay and Various Discourse
Communities;
Discussion of autobiographical techniques and the role
of a peer reviewer;
Discussion of Service Learning Requirement;
Class brainstorming about possible service projects.
January 30th: Jack
Solomon, ³Masters of Desire: The Culture of American Advertising,² pp. 328
341 (Writing Lives text);
³Proposing
a Solution,² pp. 390 413 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: Locate and analyze a particular instance of public discourse for
its explicit and implicit messages, looking critically at everything presented
from the text to the images and their arrangement. What methods does the text use to make you want or need the
product or service? How does it
engage your interest or desire?
Bring a copy of your chosen text to class and be prepared to present
your analysis of it to the class. (Update journal after class discussion.)
Discussion
of on-Campus Service Learning Opportunities: Guest Speaker: Ms. Courtney
Esparza, SCSU Assistant Director of Counseling Services;
Small
group brainstorming about service project;
Service
Project Proposal assigned;
Discussion
of Proposal Writing;
Discussion
of Solomon article
February 4th: Lars
Eighner, ³On Dumpster Diving,² pp. 63 74 (Writing Lives text)
³Reading Rhetorically:
The Writer as Strong Reader,² pp. 100 - 128 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: Think about the literacies described and deployed in ³On
Dumpster Diving.² What does
Eighner think you need to know to become a successful, literate Dumpster
diver? What values do you need to
assume? Why is Eighner a
successful Dumpster diver? (Update
journal after class discussion.)
Record
e-mail addresses.
Discussion of Eighner¹s essay;
Discussion
of Rhetoric essay;
Literacy
Narrative assigned
February 6th: Sylvia
Scribner, ³Literacy in Three Metaphors,² pp. 34 49 (Writing Lives
text)
Journal
Prompt: In what ways does Scribner move beyond traditional definitions
of literacy that are limited to reading and writing? (Update journal after class discussion.)
Distribute
e-mail addresses to class;
Discussion
of Scribner article;
Assign
writing groups for peer review;
Workshop
Service Project Proposals.
Complete peer reviews.
Service Project Proposal draft due.
Feb. 11th: Richard
Rodriguez, ³Aria, a Memoir of a Bilingual Childhood,² pp. 86 96 (Writing
Lives text)
³Writing
an Autobiographical Narrative,² pp. 142 158 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: How does Rodriguez associate language and power with his
parents? (Update journal after class discussion.)
Discussion of Rodriguez article;
Discussion
of Autobiographical Narrative article
Service
Project Proposal due.
Feb. 13th: Marianna
De Marro Torgounicle, ³On Being White, Female and Born in Bensonhurst,² pp. 109
120 (Writing Lives text)
Journal
Prompt: What does it mean to be literate in Bensonhurst? What expectations for behavior and
language use exist in the Bensonhurst community? How do they limit and damage them? Put your discussion
in the context of your own experience as a member of a community, and
consider how such expectations originate and are perpetuated or resisted.
(Update
journal after class discussion.)
Discussion of De Marro Torgounicle essay
Feb. 18th: Mike
Rose, ³Crossing Boundaries,² pp. 162 191 (Writing Lives text)
Journal
Prompt: All of us, in some significant ways, are under-prepared for
college and university work.
Describe a way in which you have felt under-prepared for college. What steps have you taken to overcome
these gaps? (Update journal after
class discussion.)
Discussion of scheduling and completing service
learning project.
Workshop Literacy Narrative drafts. Complete peer
reviews.
Literacy
Narrative draft due.
Feb. 20th: Conferences
with Peer Writing Group #1. Other
students do not need to
attend this class, and can use the time to complete
their service learning project.
Feb. 25th: Anne
Lamott, ³Shitty First Drafts,² pp. 21 27 (handout).
³Solving Content Problems: Thesis and Support,² pp. 40
53 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: Describe the process you use in developing a thesis in your
papers. What aspects of this
process need improvement? What
aspects work well for you? (Update
journal after class discussion.)
By
this date, you must have completed two hours of your service learning
project. Time sheet signature from
your service project mentor, written on the organization¹s letterhead must be
turned in.
Free
writing in journal/notebook about service learning project. Discussion of service learning project
in peer writing groups and with class.
Discussion
of Lamott and Allyn and Bacon essays.
Assign
Public Literacy Analysis paper.
Literacy
Narrative due.
Feb. 27th: Conferences
with students from any of the peer writing groups. Students who do not attend may use the time to complete
their service learning project.
March 4th: bell hooks, ³Confronting Class in the Classroom,² pp.
235 245 (Writing Lives text)
Journal Prompt: hooks claims that class is
rarely talked about in classrooms.
In what ways does your experience support or contradict hooks¹ claim? (Update journal after class discussion.)
Discussion
of hooks essay.
Journal/Notebooks
due.
March 6th: Service Learning Article (to be assigned)
Journal
Prompt: By now, you have completed at least two hours of work on your
service learning project. What did
you expect to discover before undertaking this task? How is your actual experience different than what you
expected? What are you learning
about the role of literacy in the context of your project?
Bring
in a news article relating to the service learning project you have
chosen. Be prepared to discuss the
article and its impact on how you view your service learning project.
March 11th: M.
Kadi, ³The Internet is Four Inches Tall,² pp. 431 440 (Writing Lives
text).
Journal
Prompt: Do you think the internet can be a democratizing force? Why or why not? Does it provide mind-opening or mind
numbing experiences? How do your
experiences on the Net relate to the issues Kadi raises?
Discussion of Kadi essay
March 13th: E.D.
Hirsch, Jr., ³Cultural Literacy,² pp. 195 206 (Writing Lives text).
Journal
Prompt: Hirsch suggests that there is a body of knowledge that every
American must know in order to read and write well. How would such content be determined? Who would decide? What are the political, social, and
economic stakes involved in such decisions?
By
this date, you must have completed four hours of your service learning
project. Time sheet signature from
your service project mentor, written on the organization¹s letterhead must be
turned in.
Discussion of Hirsch essay
In-class free-writing and peer discussion about
service learning project.
Workshop Public Literacy drafts. Complete peer reviews.
Public
Literacy Analysis drafts due.
March 18th: Conferences
with Peer Writing Group #2. Other
students do not need to attend this class and can use the time to complete the
service learning project.
March 20th: Jacqueline
Jones Royster, ³Perspectives on the Intellectual Tradition of Black Women
Writers,² pp. 223 234 (Writing Lives text).
Journal
Prompt: How does Royster define ³literacy²? Compare her definition with Hirsh¹s (from the March 13th reading). Do you see similarities or
differences? Explain.
Discussion of Royster essay;
Public Literacy Analysis papers due.
March 25th and
27th: Spring Break!!
April 1st: Theodore
R. Sizer, ³Public Literacy: Puzzlements of a High School Watcher,² pp. 323
327 (Writing Lives text).
Kolln,
Martha, ³Choosing Stylistic Variations,² pp. 213 230 (handout from the text Rhetorical
Grammar: Grammatical Choices, Rhetorical Effects, Fourth Edition. New York: Longman, 2003.)
Journal
Prompt: Consider the relationship between academic literacy and public
literacy. What does the term
³public literacy² mean and what does it encompass? (Update journal entry after class discussion.)
Discussion
of Sizer¹s essay and the nuances and depth of the term ³literacy.²
Discussion
of the role of rhetorical strategies in successful writing
April 3rd: Paulo
Friere, ³The Banking Concept of Education,² pp. 209 222 (Writing Lives
text).
³Seeing
Rhetorically: The Writer as Observer,² pp. 79 99 (Allyn and Bacon handout)
Journal
Prompt: Friere says that the traditional classroom is based on ³the
banking concept of education.²
What is the banking concept of education? In a ³banking² classroom, what are the roles of the
participants? (Update journal after
class discussion.)
By
this date, you must have completed six hours of your service learning
project. Time sheet signature from
your service project mentor, written on the organization¹s letterhead must be
turned in.
In-class
free-writing and peer discussion about service learning project;
Discussion
of Friere essay;
Discussion
of Rhetorical Observation essay;
Assignment
of Using Ethnographic Methods paper
April 8th: Zitkala-Sa,
³From the School Days of an Indian Girl,² pp. 268 281 (Writing Lives
text).
Kolln,
Martha, ³The Writer¹s Voice,² pp. 64 - 82 (handout from the text Rhetorical
Grammar: Grammatical Choices, Rhetorical Effects, Fourth Edition. New York: Longman, 2003.)
Journal
Prompt: Zitkala-Sa obviously learned to write well. Speculate a bit about what it cost her
to become literate in the world of the ³pale face.² (Update journal
after class discussion.)
Discussion
of Zitkala-Sa essay.
Discussion
of the role of voice in one¹s writing.
April 10th: Allan
Bloom, ³The Student and the University,² pp. 294 304 (Writing Lives
text).
Journal
Prompt: Bloom argues that the university curriculum is so fragmented
that none of the courses seem to ³speak to each other.² Are there examples of this
fragmentation at Southern? Is this
indeed a problem? Why or why not? (Update journal after class discussion.)
April 15th: Draft
of Using Ethnographic Methods paper due.
By
this date, you must have completed eight hours of your service learning
project. Time sheet signature from your service project mentor, written on the
organization¹s letterhead must be turned in.
In-class
free-writing and peer/class discussion about service learning project.
Workshop
Using Ethnographic Methods draft.
Complete peer reviews.
Discussion
of Ethnographic observations.
April 17th: Conferences
with Peer Writing Group #3. Other
students do not need to attend this class, and can use the time to complete the
service learning project.
April 22nd: Jon
Katz, Rock, Rap, and Movies Bring You the News,² pp. 367 377 (Writing
Lives text)
Journal
Prompt: Where did you get your news today? Was it from your usual source? Where would you go if you needed absolutely reliable
information? (Update journal after class
discussion.)
Using Ethnographic Methods paper due.
Discussion of Katz¹ article;
Assignment of Service Learning Reflective paper.
April 24th: Shirley
Brice Heath, ³The Fourth Vision: Literate Language at Work,² pp. 142 161 (Writing
Lives text)
³Writing a
Reflective Self-Evaluation,² pp. 628 640 (Allyn and Bacon handout).
Journal
Prompt: Heath claims that the ³overwhelming tendancy of education today
is to simplify, standardize, and make predictable.² Based on your own experiences in school, as in this class in
particular, as well as on the evidence presented by Heath, to what extent is
her claim persuasive? (Update journal after class discussion.)
Discussion
of Heath article
Discussion
of Self-Reflective Writing
April 29th: Conferences
with Peer Writing Group #4. Other
students do not need to attend this class, and can use the time to complete the
service learning project.
May 1st: Jean
Anyon, ³Social Class and the Hidden Curriculum of Work,² pp. 248 267 (Working
Lives text).
Journal
Prompt: Anyon argues that there is probably a connection ³between
everyday activity in schools and classrooms and the unequal structure of
economic relationships in which we work and live.² Describe your everyday college activities and how they
contrast, economically and socially, with the work you are doing in your
service learning project.
By
this date, you must have completed ten hours of your service learning
project. Time sheet signature from
your service project mentor, written on the organization¹s letterhead must be
turned in.
May 6th: John
T. Molloy, ³From John T. Molloy¹s
New Dress for Success,² pp. 416 430 (Writing Lives text).
Journal
Prompt: Think of a time when matters of dress have had great
significance for you. Can you
remember an instance when the way you dressed affected how you were treated,
when you misjudged a situation and dressed inappropriately? How do clothes represent values and
beliefs? How do they play a role
in stereotyping and categorizing a person? What role does clothing play in the context of your service
learning project? (Update journal after class discussion.)
Draft of Service Learning Reflective paper due.
Discussion
of Molloy essay.
Workshop drafts with Peer Writing Group.
Complete course assessments.
May 8th: Conference
date for any students needing individual help in revising papers or fulfilling
his/her service learning requirement.
Other students do not have to attend class and can use the time to
complete their service learning project.
May 13th: 10:15
12:15: Final Exam period.
Service Learning Reflective paper due.
Portfolios and journal/notebooks due.
Critical
Statement and Description of Major Writing Assignments
This course is designed to move back and forth between the concepts of public, personal, and academic literacy. At the same time, we will focus on the students¹ service learning project, a ten-hour community based service to be performed outside of class. Students will be required to maintain a journal/notebook. I will offer a journal prompt to accompany each essay we read. Students will come to class having written their initial reaction to the essay, and then they will make a second entry about the article based on class discussion. I will collect the journals once during the semester to ensure students are keeping up with the work and that their comments are in line with my expectations. I will collect them again at the end of the summer. This way, students will be writing at least twice a week, and I feel they will be better invested in the essays we discuss.
The first short writing assignment (2 3 pages) will be a proposal for their service learning project. This will be due after we have discussed the many possible community groups with which they will connect. I want to be sure their project is structured and supervised carefully so that both the student and the service organization will fully benefit from the student¹s ten volunteer hours. Drafts of each paper will be due one week before the final draft is due. We will workshop each piece in peer writing groups, and students will revise based on peer feedback and self-reflection.
The first major paper will be a 3 4 page Literacy Narrative. I chose this as the first paper to get students thinking about their own struggles with literacy, and to invest them personally in this subject. I want them to consider the relationship between their own literacy and the community. Through the introspection required in this assignment, I hope to make them more sensitive to the literacy issues involved in their community-based service learning project. I want them to reflect on instances when they did not have the literacy to fully participate in a particular community, and how this void made them feel. My goal is to help them understand that everyone struggles with literacy at various points in their life. I want them to reflect upon the importance of literacy, and to develop a sense of compassion for others who struggle with literacy in different discourse communities.
The second major paper is a Public Literacy Analysis (3 4 pages), designed to make students aware of the multiple literacies that permeate our culture. In this assignment, students will focus on a particular web site, text, or set of texts, advertising piece, media source, junk mail, etc. sources of information that are within the public forum. They are to reflect upon the location of their item of public literacy, analyze how the language and images are incorporated, and what effect these choices have upon the way one might perceive this text. They will perform a rhetorical analysis of their example in an effort to build their awareness of the purposes, structures, and effects of material that is available to the general public. My goal is to get students think about the role of public discourse and how it shapes our community. I also want to increase their awareness of issues of literacy they will encounter in their service learning project. As this assignment is very broad, I will carefully construct the assignment sheet to eliminate as much confusion as possible. I will also allow students to brainstorm the various examples of public literacy they can choose from
The third major writing assignment is an Ethnographic Methods paper (3 4 pages). For this essay, students will focus on various literacies at work within SCSU, and they will conduct a form of ethnographic research designed to stimulate their thinking about academic literacies, literacies that may shape their success in college. Students will select an academic setting, and then analyze the texts used for the class, the use of classroom space, teaching methods, types of tests, patterns of student interaction, etc. Students will examine and explain the types of literacy at work in their site. They will reflect on communication strategies that are both successful and unsuccessful in their site. They will consider the roles of reading, writing, and speaking in their site. By the time this essay is assigned, students will have become familiar with their surroundings at SCSU, so they will already have some understanding of the particular site they choose. This project is designed to increase students¹ awareness of the many variations involved in literacy, and to make them reflect on the many choices that determine a discourse community.
The fourth and final major paper (4 5 pages) is a Reflective Essay, based on their experiences during the semester in their service learning project. Drawing on the skills they will have developed in their prior papers, I want them to analyze the discourses and versions of literacy they encountered in their project. I will ask them to compare their initial expectations with a post-service reflection. They will analyze how and why various aspects of literacy are used within their service project environment. I want them to analyze and reflect upon instances when they observed individuals at their site struggling with literacy, and the steps they took to overcome these challenges. I will ask them to discuss the structure and effectiveness of the methods of discourse they observed at their site. Without knowing how my students will respond to their service learning project, I am not able to fully conceptualize what I will require in this paper. That will take shape as the semester progresses and we discuss their experiences. Overall, however, I want this paper to circle back to the three other papers they wrote in an effort to link the notions of personal, public, and academic literacies to both their own lives and to the service learning environment where they volunteered their time.
I will assign grades to papers throughout the semester, but will always extend the opportunity for students to revise if they would like to try to improve upon their grade. Their final portfolio will demonstrate the progression of their learning throughout the semester, and the level of their investment in the service learning concept. Students will be evaluated based on their final portfolio, which includes the four major essays (50%), journal/notebook (30%), and participation, attendance, and peer review (20%). Although I am sure I will change this syllabus many times before the semester begins, I feel I have a structure that is logical and recursive. However, if I observe that my plans do not succeed, I will revise my syllabus to maximize student learning and their personal investment in my class.